Corene stands at a ship’s rail with Foley a pace behind her, looking at a harbor city divided into red and white halves, a red tower crowned with fire on one side and a white tower on the other.
Palminera from the sea: a city split into red and white, a tower of flame and a tower of shadow, and a runaway princess sailing in to try for a throne.

Elemental Blessings · Book III · 2015

Jeweled Fire

A runaway princess, a spy behind a market counter, three nephews and one throne, and a city of two towers, one of flame and one of shadow.

Jeweled Fire is the third Elemental Blessings novel, published by Ace in November 2015, and the sweela book. Its heroine is Corene, the red-haired, sharp-tongued princess who was a twelve-year-old terror in Troubled Waters and a runaway at the end of Royal Airs. At seventeen, no longer in line for Welce’s throne, she has stowed away on the Empress Filomara’s ship to find out whether she can win one in Malinqua, where the empress is weighing three nephews and a newly found grandson for her heir, and has gathered foreign princesses as their possible brides.

The book sets Corene’s chapters beside a handful told by Leah Frothen, a well-born Welchin woman who has spent five years in the capital, Palminera, as Darien Serlast’s spy, lately from behind the counter of a Coziquela merchant’s stall in the Great Market. What starts as a comedy of dinners, shopping and language lessons among four rival would-be brides who become friends turns, once a body is found under the palace, into a murder mystery that ends on top of a burning tower. Leah’s quieter chapters, about a woman hiding from her own past, set up Unquiet Land, where she is the lead.

Shinn has said she switched villains while writing because she liked her first choice too much. This page names the one she kept, and spoils everything else too.

Movement 1

The Runaway Princess


The book opens in Leah’s eyes. At noon in high summer she is squeezed onto the Palminera dock with half the city as the empress’s fleet comes home: dozens of ships crammed with soldiers, because Filomara believes the threat of war is the surest way to keep the peace. Aboard the flagship is a Welchin princess who stowed away without her family’s consent. Leah remembers Corene as a fierce, red-haired twelve-year-old. Darien Serlast, regent of Welce and soon to be king, sent Leah here five years ago; his letters, unusually distressed, now ask her to watch over his runaway daughter. In Billini’s dockside tavern she trades gossip about the young man the empress is bringing from Welce.

The voyage south takes two ninedays, and by the end of it Corene figures everyone aboard hates her. Over her bitter brew Filomara talks statecraft: she married into the prefect’s family to unite the factions, and she will never name a bastard heir. Corene, who sailed hoping for a brilliant marriage, wonders whether she is only following her scheming mother, Alys. With her are Foley, a member of her father’s royal guard who once guarded her sister Josetta, steady and quiet; and Steff, the Welchin farm boy whom Zoe’s coru touch identified as the son of Filomara’s dead daughter Subriella.

Palminera is a city in two halves, red granite to the south and white stone to the north. Over the south rises a red tower crowned with petals of stained glass around a living fire; over the north, a white tower with a glowing dome. Sattisi, the empress’s sour cousin-by-marriage, explains what they mean:

“Fire and ice. South and north. Flame and shadow. Flesh and spirit. Life and death.”

No one is waiting on the dock for Corene, and she is glad. At a palace split like the city, Filomara introduces her impassive steward, Lorian, and Corene introduces Foley as her protector.

Leah stands in a dense dockside crowd at noon, shading her eyes as a fleet of ships crowded with soldiers sails into the harbor.
III · 1 Half the City on the Dock The book opens in Leah’s eyes, not Corene’s. She has spent five years in Palminera as Darien Serlast’s spy, and now she is squeezed onto the dock with half the city as the empress’s fleet comes home: dozens of ships crammed with soldiers, because Filomara thinks the threat of war keeps the peace. Somewhere aboard the flagship is a princess Leah remembers as a fierce, red-haired twelve-year-old, now a runaway from Welce.
In a tiny ship’s cabin the grey-haired empress raises a finger over a steaming cup while a red-haired young woman sits opposite her with her arms folded.
III · 2 Lessons at Sea The voyage south takes two ninedays, and Corene figures everyone aboard hates her by now. In the cubbyhole that serves as a sitting room, Filomara sips her bitter brew and talks statecraft: she married into the prefect’s family to unite the factions, and she will never name a bastard as heir. Corene, who sailed hoping for a brilliant marriage, wonders whether she is only living up to her mother, Alys.
A tall, sharp-featured steward bows in a palace courtyard between red and white walls and tall flowering hedges, beside the empress, as a red-haired princess presents her guard.
III · 3 The Steward, Lorian Open carriages roll through a city split into red and white halves to a palace split the same way, and Filomara introduces the man who makes it run: her steward, Lorian, tall and sharp-featured, his face utterly impassive. Corene in turn introduces Foley, a member of her father’s royal guard, here as her protector. Lorian lodges them near each other on the fourth floor of the royal wing. It is worth remembering his face.
Movement 2

A Court of Fire and Shadow


Melissande of Cozique, small, doll-faced, gorgeous and cheerfully indiscreet, sweeps into Corene’s room and sizes up the field: three nephews, the empress’s two daughters dead, and Jiramondi already marked as a husband who would not mind her lovers. At the first palace dinner Corene meets the contenders: Garameno, the clever eldest, in a wheelchair since his horse fell on him; amiable Jiramondi; and Greggorio, about eighteen, handsome, kind and slow. Alette of Dhonsho, the third foreign princess, shows no expression; Liramelli, the prefect’s plain, serious daughter, dresses all in white, and Corene guesses she is elay. As the empress rises to leave, Garameno asks why she has kept her good news quiet and announces it himself: Subriella had two sons, and one of them is here. The room erupts. Filomara confirms it but will have Steff’s blood tested; science, she says, trumps anecdotes. That night Foley puts his finger on what is odd about this court: nearly every likely heir of recent decades is dead.

Leah’s chapters run alongside. To reach the princess she poses as a market vendor, and Billini steers her to Chandran, a big, bearded Coziquela merchant whose stall on the market’s top floor the royal party always visits. After her first day behind his counter he drugs her keerza. Sick and dizzy, she admits she is Darien’s agent; Chandran, who almost never laughs, laughs, and asks her back. Shaken, she sits on the blue coru bench of a little Welchin temple; born torz, she has learned to adapt.

On a royal outing to the Great Market, four storeys of red and white stone with livestock on the ground floor and jewels at the top, Corene is drawn behind a curtain by the Welchin assistant at Chandran’s stall. It is Leah. They agree a code for letters, red stones meaning danger, and Corene chatters about Mally, the little girl who stood in for Odelia as a decoy princess, never guessing that Mally is Leah’s daughter. Afterward Corene quizzes Garameno about the market’s rents and contracts and surprises him: she has a head for trade.

Filomara has had old Renalto Corsicara, head of the institute of biological research, take samples in secret, and Renalto pronounces Steff Subriella’s son. The stern empress weeps over his hands and presents him as potentially her heir. Jiramondi, now giving Corene language lessons, walks her through the succession and the old palace poisonings, and mentions that Sarona, the girl Greggorio loved, ran off a nineday or two before Corene came.

A small, black-haired young woman in a pleated indigo dress laughs as she sweeps into a room where a red-haired young woman rises in surprise among her luggage.
III · 4 A Princess from Cozique She knocks, sweeps in and takes over the room: Melissande of Cozique, the loveliest person Corene has ever seen, small and doll-faced, with black curls and eyes of a blue so dark it shades into purple. “I have never in my life met a redhead who was boring.” In fluent Coziquela she sizes up the field: three nephews, the empress’s two daughters dead, and which nephew might make her a convenient husband.
At a long dinner table the grey-haired empress stands and points to a startled young man, while a smiling man in a wheelchair beside him and other diners turn to stare.
III · 5 Subriella’s Son The first palace dinner is as uncomfortable as any state dinner in Chialto, and Corene meets the contenders: Garameno, the clever eldest, in a wheelchair since his horse fell on him; amiable Jiramondi; handsome, slow Greggorio. As the empress rises to leave, Garameno asks why she has kept her good news to herself, and tells the room: her dead daughter Subriella had two sons, and one of them is here. Pandemonium. Filomara will test Steff’s blood before she embraces him.
In the curtained back room of a market stall, a pale young woman clutches a cup while a large bearded merchant watches her across a tiny firepit and kettle.
III · 6 The Merchant’s Test To reach the princess, Leah poses as a market vendor, and the tavern keeper Billini steers her to Chandran, a big, bearded Coziquela merchant whose stall on the market’s top floor the royal party always visits. After her first day behind his counter he brews keerza over a tiny firepit, and it is drugged. Sick and dizzy, she admits she is Darien’s agent. Chandran, who almost never laughs, laughs, and asks her back.
A princess in indigo, a red-haired companion and a young man climb a spiral staircase side by side through a vast market hall of red and white stone arches, a guard following.
III · 7 The Great Market Four storeys of red and white stone, open to sun and rain through great arches: everything in Palminera is for sale here, from livestock to opals. On a royal outing Corene and Melissande drag Steff away from ten minutes’ talk about a pair of brown working horses, and the three climb the spiral stair side by side, since the really fine things are on the top floor. Foley stays a pace behind, a solid shape at Corene’s back.
Two women sit close on stools in a curtained back room lined with glass music boxes, one leaning forward to speak urgently while the other holds a music box.
III · 8 Behind the Curtain The Welchin assistant at Chandran’s stall, hazel-eyed, brown hair in a plain knot, draws Corene behind the curtain. She is Leah, five years in Malinqua working for the regent. They set a code for letters, red stones meaning danger, and Corene chatters about Mally, the little girl who stood in for Odelia as a decoy princess. She has no idea that Mally is Leah’s daughter. On the way out she buys a glass music box for Josetta.
The grey-haired empress, eyes wet, rests her cheek against a young man’s clasped hands while a stooped old scientist smiles and a red-haired young woman watches.
III · 9 You Are My Grandson Two testers have already taken Steff’s blood, hair and fingernails, but Filomara has had old Renalto Corsicara, head of the institute of biological research, take samples in secret. He pronounces Steff Subriella’s son. The stern empress tells him: “You are my grandson. Subriella’s boy.” Then she lifts his clasped hands and rests her wet face against them. That evening, before dinner, she presents him to the waiting court as potentially her heir. Three nephews start doing sums.
Movement 3

Towers and Tunnels


A tour takes the young people up the fire tower’s winding stair to a roof where flames taller than a man leap behind jagged glass. Alette climbs onto the flimsy rail, closes her eyes and sways forward. Greggorio lunges and drags her back, and afterward says plainly that she tried to jump. Melissande suspects that the princesses are not guests but hostages, so Corene tests it: hair scraped back, in her plainest clothes, she slips out with Foley into the red-granite quarter. Foley names a meeting place in case they are ever separated, the tower of fire, and before long a roadblock is checking outbound coaches for a girl with red hair.

Leah has become Chandran’s assistant in earnest; she has an eye for wares. A blunt Welchin sea captain, Ada Simms, has worked out whose daughter Darien is worried about, and mentions that she trades with Kayle Dochenza. Leah lays escape plans, down to three weak places in the city wall.

The three foreign princesses and Liramelli become friends. To coax Alette out of her gloom they hold an afternoon feast of lassenberries and keerza and draw blessings for one another from Corene’s coins. Alette admits that if she does not marry whichever nephew is named heir, her father will send assassins; there is a man she loves. On a rainy afternoon Liramelli leads Corene, Melissande, Steff and Foley into the tunnels beneath the palace. At the bottom of a locked stairwell they find a body, long dead; the wheat-blond braid and a necklace tell Liramelli it is Sarona. Greggorio arrives, white and haunted, and lays his hands on the locked door. When Leah next sees Corene, she offers to put her on a ship that afternoon. Corene is torn, and stays.

On the narrow roof ledge of a tower, a dark-skinned girl in a bright robe stands on the low rail with her eyes closed as a young man lunges for her arm, a great fire behind stained glass beside them.
III · 10 The Rail of the Fire Tower A tour of the towers was meant as cover for a jaunt to the market. On the fire tower’s roof, where flames taller than a man leap behind jagged glass, Alette of Dhonsho scrambles onto the flimsy metal rail, closes her eyes and sways forward. Greggorio lunges and wrenches her back. Afterward he does not pretend otherwise: she tried to jump. From here to the last chapter, the towers are where the book’s turns happen.
Early in the morning a red-haired young woman with her hair scraped back walks fast beside a broad guardsman down a street of red stone houses, a tower crowned with fire above the roofs.
III · 11 Go to the Tower of Fire Melissande suspects that the princesses are not guests but hostages, so Corene tries an experiment. Hair scraped back, in her plainest Malinquese clothes, she and Foley slip out of the palace into the red-granite quarter as windows open for the day. Foley names a place to meet if they are ever separated: “go to the tower of fire and I’ll find you.” Before long a roadblock is checking outbound coaches for a girl with red hair.
A plain young woman with her arms folded listens to a big, red-faced woman sea captain on a sunlit wharf crowded with tall ships.
III · 12 A Captain on the Wharf Chandran has made Leah his assistant in earnest: she has an eye, and sells out a shipment of little wooden boxes with hidden drawers within a nineday. Among the Welchin captains in port, blunt, red-faced Ada Simms has worked out whose daughter Darien is fretting about, and mentions that she has traded with Kayle Dochenza for five years. Leah lays escape plans, and finds three places where someone desperate could slip through the city wall.
Four young women sit around a small table of berries and steaming cups while a red-haired one stirs her fingers through a heap of small brass coins.
III · 13 Blessings for Each Other To coax Alette out of her gloom after the tower, the four young women throw an afternoon feast: lassenberries, sticky and an odd colour; keerza; and Corene’s bag of blessings from home. They draw for one another. Corene pulls charm for Melissande and laughs; for Alette, Liramelli pulls love. It is the book’s friendship at its warmest. Then Alette tells them that if she does not marry the chosen heir, her father will send assassins.
By candlelight at the foot of a stone stairwell, a guard steps in front of a red-haired young woman while a young man comforts a weeping blond girl; a long fair braid lies at the edge of the light.
III · 14 At the Bottom of the Stair On a rainy afternoon Liramelli shows her friends the tunnels under the palace: a spring bubbling out of the rock, storerooms, rats. At the bottom of a locked stairwell lies a body, long dead. Foley moves to block Corene’s view, but the long wheat-blond braid tied with a ribbon, and a necklace, tell Liramelli who it is: Sarona, the girl everyone thought had run away. Steff takes the sobbing Liramelli in his arms. Corene and Foley start asking who could have brought her here.
Movement 4

War and Knives


Corene says flatly that Sarona was murdered, and the friends list suspects, the prefect among them. Berringey declares war on Malinqua. Foley thinks it may be time to leave; Steff refuses, since he belongs here; Jiramondi admits that the court reads its guests’ letters. One evening Corene sprawls on her settee and asks Foley what sort of woman he would marry, offering a tall, blond, quiet girl, and he points out that she has just described Josetta.

A riding party goes north to the white tower, whose stone seems to swallow light rather than shine. Garameno, who loves to ride, talks shrewdly with Corene, and she notices the power in his shoulders. Below the tower two men seize Alette and run for a cart. Foley leaps from his saddle with a knife and comes out of the fight bloodied; Greggorio carries Alette into the tower, and she tells him he saved her life. The attackers were Dhonshon men with a hawk, her father’s crest, on their sleeves, and one shouted not here: Palminera believes that whoever kills in a tower’s shadow dies within three days. That night Alette whispers of Cheelin, the man she loves, and Corene vows to get her out.

In lamplight, a red-haired young woman sprawls on a settee and grins at a guardsman sitting very upright on a hard chair across the room.
III · 15 A Tall Girl, Blond and Quiet Berringey has declared war, Sarona’s murder hangs over the palace, and Foley thinks it may be time to leave. Instead Corene flings herself on her settee and interrogates him about what sort of woman he would marry, offering a tall girl, blond, with a quiet manner. He points out that she has just described Josetta, the princess he used to guard. Shinn has called this quiet talk a close second to her favourite scene. Neither of them is really talking about Josetta.
Below a gleaming white tower, two men haul a struggling girl in a yellow shawl toward a cart while a guardsman leaps from his horse with a knife and a young man sprints to help.
III · 16 Hawks Below the White Tower A riding party goes north to the white tower, and Garameno, who loves to ride, talks shrewdly with Corene; she notices the power in his shoulders. Then Greggorio tears past shouting Alette’s name. Two men have seized her and are running for a cart. Foley leaps from his saddle with a knife, and he and an attacker both come away bloodied. Greggorio carries Alette into the tower. The attackers wore a hawk on their sleeves: her father’s crest.
Movement 5

The Vanishing Princess


Corene asks Leah to rescue Alette instead of herself, and Chandran agrees to help. In the lanes off the blockaded harbor Leah calls Cheelin Barlio’s name until he appears, gives him a code phrase, and recruits Teyta, a Dhonshon shopkeeper’s daughter of Alette’s height and build. Then, knocking at a door, she is pulled inside by Nelson Ardelay, the sweela Prime. Darien has sent him ahead of fifty Welchin warships as an ambassador, and he has followed Leah’s trail through Captain Simms and Kayle. He has been looking for her for five years.

The escape is a conjuring trick. Teyta wears Alette’s flame-coloured dress and bright yellow scarf; Alette, in muted blue, drapes a scarf over her head and slips away to Leah’s people, while the false Alette climbs the fire tower again with the party and rides back to the palace. Corene is sick from food bought in Tower Alley; Foley carries her to her room, and she keeps the silver button that came off his jacket in her fist.

The next evening Lorian announces at dinner that Alette is gone. Corene, with Alette’s embroidered blessing of courage in her pocket, goes on the attack: the princesses are hostages, gathered to drag their countries into Filomara’s war with Berringey. If so, the empress replies, it has worked; Welchin warships wait offshore, and Coziquela ships are coming. When Corene says Filomara sent her own youngest daughter to Berringey to be murdered, the empress slams her hand on the table. Foley moves into Corene’s suite to guard her, and they spar in the night, sweela fire against torz steadfastness. In the morning Nelson appears at breakfast, through the blockade, with a gift for the empress: an elaymotive from Kayle’s factory. In the gardens Corene lays out her theory: someone is clearing Greggorio’s way to the throne and to Liramelli. Nelson tells her he has found Leah, and that Mally is Leah’s child.

On a narrow, run-down street a woman in a plain jacket speaks urgently to a tall young man in clean clothes standing in a doorway.
III · 17 A Message for Cheelin Offered a ship out, Corene asks Leah to save Alette instead, and Chandran agrees to help. So Leah walks the twisting lanes off the blockaded harbor, calling Cheelin Barlio’s name. Someone throws a rock from a window; then a well-spoken young man in clean clothes, plainly out of place in the slum, appears. She gives him the code phrase, and he lights up. Next she recruits Teyta, a Dhonshon shopkeeper’s daughter of Alette’s height and build.
A stocky, ruddy man with greying red curls draws a startled young woman by the arm through an open door into a warm room.
III · 18 Found by the Sweela Prime Leah knocks on a door, braced for suspicious questions, and is pulled inside by Nelson Ardelay, the sweela Prime, who wants to know whether she is hungry. Darien wanted to send his navy straight in for his daughter; instead Nelson has come ahead as an ambassador, fifty warships out at sea. Captain Simms asked Kayle Dochenza about Leah, and Kayle told Nelson, who has been looking for her for five years. Her chapters stop being only about Corene: someone at home wants her back.
At the foot of a red stone tower, a girl in a flame-coloured dress and yellow scarf leans on a red-haired woman’s arm on the way to the door, a small dark-haired woman following a step behind.
III · 19 Two Alettes The escape works like a conjuring trick. Teyta puts on Alette’s flame-coloured dress and her bright yellow scarf; Alette, in muted blue, drapes a matching scarf over her head and slips away to Leah’s people. The false Alette, swooning on Corene’s arm, climbs the fire tower with the party for a picnic, then rides back to the palace with her friends fussing over her. Corene, who ate street food from Tower Alley, really is sick.
A broad guardsman carries a pale, sick red-haired young woman along a palace corridor, her cheek against his jacket and one hand closed tight on its front.
III · 20 A Tarnished Silver Button Back at the palace, Corene is too sick to stand, and Foley carries her to her room. It is not the first time he has carried her, and being in his arms is almost worth being ill. Emilita, her maid, shoos him out at the door. Only later does Corene find what she has been clutching: a plain silver button gone a little dull, torn off his jacket as she clung to him. She keeps it.
In a candlelit dining room a red-haired young woman in a purple shawl stands and points down the table at the grey-haired empress, who has slammed her hand on the cloth while the other diners freeze.
III · 21 The Accusation Next evening Lorian tells the empress at dinner that Alette is gone. Corene, who helped her go, attacks: the princesses are hostages, gathered to drag their countries into Filomara’s war with Berringey. If so, the empress replies, it has worked; Welchin warships wait a few miles offshore, and Coziquela ships are coming. When Corene says Filomara sent her own youngest daughter to Berringey to be murdered, the empress slams her hand on the table.
Movement 6

The Masked Gala


At Nelson’s dinner every tongue loosens, and Liramelli and Steff are drawing together. Melissande offers Corene a kiss, curious to know what kissing a woman is like; Corene thinks of Foley, and Melissande sees it.

Leah’s chapter jumps ahead to the night. The city shuts for a gala in Steff’s honour, and Chandran takes her up the white tower with a picnic to watch the fireworks. She tells him about the daughter she left. The booms over the harbor are not fireworks, and Chandran, at his spyglass, knows whose ships they are.

The book then rewinds to gala day. Melissande wears dark blue and a velvet mask that hides nothing; Corene wears grey shot with crimson under a hooded mask that covers her telltale hair. The palace grounds become a labyrinth of candles, fire jugglers and acrobats on wires, and Corene and Foley share a flaming drink. Following a lantern to the white gazebo at the heart of the maze, Corene finds a masked man on his knees beside Garameno’s wheelchair, and in it Greggorio, dead. The man unmasks. It is Garameno, standing and moving freely. Foley suspects him; Garameno swears he found the body when he came back for the chair. Foley sends Corene for help.

Running, she reasons it out: in the dark, the killer took Greggorio for Garameno, since the cousins are built alike. She finds Lorian and tells him about the body. He snaps that it is Garameno who was strangled. She had said only bruised. The steward, fond of Liramelli and devoted to Greggorio, is the killer.

At night high on a white tower, a woman beside a picnic turns as a bearded man with a spyglass looks out toward bright flashes over a dark harbor.
III · 22 Fireworks over the Harbor The city shuts down for a gala in Steff’s honour, and Chandran takes Leah up the white tower with a picnic and a single jug, to watch the fireworks from on high. She tells him about the daughter she left behind, and that only lately has she begun to think she has something to give the child. Then the booms over the harbor start to sound wrong. Chandran lifts his spyglass: “Those are Cozique ships. The city is under attack.”
At a night festival in a candlelit hedge labyrinth, a masked woman in grey and crimson, a masked woman in dark blue and a guard in dark clothes look up at fire jugglers and acrobats.
III · 23 The Masked Gala Leah’s chapter has run ahead to the night; the book now rewinds to gala day. The palace grounds become a labyrinth of head-high walls and banks of candles, with performers juggling lit torches and waltzing with mannequins of fire, and acrobats on wires. Melissande wears dark blue and a velvet mask that hides nothing; Corene wears grey shot with crimson, her telltale hair under a hood. She and Foley share a flaming drink. Before the night is out, someone will die in Garameno’s wheelchair.
Under a single lantern at a white garden gazebo, a broad man holding a mask stands beside a wheelchair in which a young man sits slumped and still, while a guard holds him back from a red-haired woman.
III · 24 The Man in the Chair A lantern hangs from the white gazebo at the heart of the maze. Beside it a masked man kneels by Garameno’s wheelchair, and in the chair is Greggorio, dead. The stranger stands and peels off his mask: Garameno, on his own feet and moving freely. Foley suspects him on the spot; Garameno swears he found the body when he came back for the chair. Foley sends Corene to find a guard, then the empress.
In a lamplit festival crowd, a red-haired young woman stares in dawning horror after a tall, grey-eyed older steward who has turned sharply away.
III · 25 The Steward’s Slip Running for help, Corene reasons it out: in the dark the killer took Greggorio for Garameno, since the cousins are built alike. She finds Lorian and tells him about the body. He snaps that it is Garameno who was strangled. She had said only bruised. The steward, fond of Liramelli and devoted to Greggorio, hurries off, and Corene, frozen among the partygoers, understands who the killer is and fears for Foley.
Movement 7

Jeweled Fire


Soldiers are shouting for the princess. Corene vaults into Nelson’s smoker car and drives blind through Palminera’s dark lanes, steering by the flame on the southern tower, because Foley said that is where he would find her. She climbs to the roof, and the soldiers follow, one at a time through the trapdoor. She tears her grey jacket in two, lights half of it at the great fire, and throws it in the face of the first man up. A burning soldier falls against the old wooden stair, and the tower catches.

Foley and Nelson find the smoker car and call to her through the smoke. Lorian, Foley tells her, ran through the maze with soldiers, screaming for them to be killed, and ended on his knees by Greggorio’s body, weeping. She bumps down the charred stair while Nelson calms the flames; when it groans loose, Foley tells her to jump, and that he loves her. They land alive, and after asking whether he meant it, she kisses him. Welchin guardsmen under Captain Sorren of the Chialto Royal Guard appear, and with Leah and Nelson they explain the night: Cozique has invaded to fetch Melissande home, and Welchin warships lie offshore.

At the occupied palace Jiramondi relays Lorian’s confession. Greggorio’s father, Morli, began the killing, and Lorian carried it on for Morli’s son: he arranged the riding accident that supposedly crippled Garameno (he could walk all along), killed Sarona when Greggorio strayed from Liramelli, and strangled the man in Garameno’s chair. Jiramondi now believes he also bribed the first blood testers to deny Steff. With Greggorio dead, Jiramondi reckons Garameno the only real choice for heir; Melissande, who expects her mother to choose her a husband, proposes a practical marriage to Jiramondi instead. Kneeling to dress the gash in Corene’s leg, Foley promises he will still love her in Welce, and suggests the work she was made for: Welce’s diplomat to all the southern nations. She will start with Cozique. She apologises to Filomara for spiriting Alette away, though no one yet knows whether Alette is safe. Half the city watches the Coziquela ship leave, and Corene, watching the red tower and the white one fade, thinks:

“I’m a sweela girl who is learning to control her own fire”

At night a red-haired young woman drives a small open motorcar down a dark lane, its two little lamps lit, toward a tower crowned with fire.
III · 26 Steering by the Flame Soldiers are shouting for the princess. Corene plows through the young men admiring Nelson’s smoker car, vaults over its low door and drives off blind through dark, winding lanes, trying switches until the side lamps come on. She has one destination: Foley told her that if they were ever separated, he would find her at the tower of fire. Its flame, visible from everywhere in the city, steers her in.
On the ledge around a great fire behind red and gold stained glass, a red-haired young woman raises a burning strip of cloth as a soldier’s head rises through a trapdoor at her feet.
III · 27 Jeweled Fire She climbs to the roof, and the soldiers follow. Only one man at a time can come through the trapdoor, and that is the only advantage she has. Corene rips her grey jacket in two, holds half of it to the great fire until a yellow flame climbs the cloth, and when the first soldier’s head pops up through the opening, she throws it in his face. The jeweled fire of the title is the tower’s, and Corene’s.
In a pocket of clear air amid smoke, a soot-streaked guardsman kneels beside a sooty red-haired young woman sitting on stone, his hands at her ankle, as they look at each other.
III · 28 After the Jump The tower is burning; one of the soldiers she set alight fell against its old wooden stair. Foley and Nelson, who found the smoker car outside, call to her through the smoke, and Nelson calms the flames as she bumps down the charred steps, until the stair groans loose and Foley tells her to jump, and that he loves her. They land alive. Ash-grimed, he checks her for broken bones. She asks: “Did you say it just so I’d jump? Or was it the truth?”
A red-haired young woman stands at the stern rail of a departing ship beside a guardsman, looking back at a sunlit city with a red tower and a white tower.
III · 29 Leaving Palminera Kneeling to dress the gash in her calf, Foley promises he will still love her in Welce, then suggests the work she was made for: Welce’s diplomat to all the southern nations. She will start with Cozique. She apologises to Filomara for spiriting Alette away, though no one knows yet whether Alette is safe. Half the city watches the Coziquela ship sail, and Corene looks back until the red tower and the white one bleach into shapes under the high sun.

The elements in this book

  • Corene is sweela, fire and mind, and the book is built on the pun. Fantasy Literature’s reviewer calls her purely sweela; the pouch of blessing coins sent from home is red, as befits a sweela girl; and she ends the book deciding that her work is to learn to control her own fire. The colour is canon: in Whispering Wood the element benches are red for sweela, blue for coru, green for torz, white for elay and black for hunti.
  • Foley is torz, earth and flesh, and the romance is fire against stone. Guarding her through the night after Alette vanishes, they trade the book’s element jab: “What’s the point of being sweela, after all, if you can’t handle a few flames?” and “What’s the point of being torz … if you can’t remain steadfast and strong?”
  • Leah was born torz, but early on, shaken by Chandran’s test, she sits on the silky blue coru bench of a little Welchin temple (a fire burning beside a plot of freshly turned earth, birds circling overhead), drawn to coru’s knack for adapting, and admits that Malinqua has given her a streak of hunti toughness too.
  • The Primes’ gifts drive the plot from offstage and on. Zoe, the coru Prime, could name Steff’s bloodline with a touch, but Filomara wants laboratory proof. Nelson Ardelay, the sweela Prime, cannot conjure fire, only tame it; when the burning tower’s flames suddenly die down, Leah, arriving with the Welchin guardsmen, knows the sweela Prime must be nearby. Kayle Dochenza, the elay Prime, never appears: he is Captain Simms’s trading partner, the builder of the smoker car Nelson brings, and a wish that he were there to blow the smoke away.
  • Five against two. Malinqua sorts people into two kinds, folk of flame and folk of shadow, and builds its whole capital on the split: red and white quarters, a red wing and a white wing, a tower of flame and a tower of shadow. Corene keeps reading strangers by Welce’s five affiliations instead (Liramelli, she guesses, is elay), and trapped above the fire she imagines turning elay and flinging herself into the air, or torz and hitting the earth.
  • Blessings as tokens of friendship. The four friends draw coins for one another (charm for Melissande; courage and love among Alette’s); after the escape Melissande hands round the blessings Alette embroidered for each of them before she left (Liramelli’s is loyalty), and Corene goes to the fateful dinner with Alette’s courage in her pocket. Corene wears three blessings stamped on gold, silver and bronze rings on her right hand.
  • The calendar. The voyage ends as Quinnahunti, high summer, gives way to Quinnatorz, and Corene notices that Malinqua does not keep the changeday; the gala is planned for a nineday or two before Quinnasweela, the fire quintile of autumn. The book runs from high summer into the fall.

Continuity notes

  • Corene: begins as a seventeen-year-old stowaway who has given up on Welce’s throne to chase Malinqua’s; ends with burned forearms and a torn right calf, unmarried, in love with Foley and loved back, setting out as Welce’s diplomat to the southern nations, Cozique first, with Foley as her guard. She has discovered a talent for trade.
  • Foley: wounded in the knife fight below the white tower; declares his love on the night of the fire; leaves Palminera with Corene.
  • Leah Frothen: Darien’s spy in Palminera for five years, latterly Chandran’s assistant at the Great Market; found by Nelson Ardelay, who has searched for her for five years. Corene learns that Mally, the decoy princess, is Leah’s daughter. Leah is bound home to Welce, where Unquiet Land opens with her back in Chialto; Chandran follows her there.
  • Steff: confirmed by Renalto’s tests as Filomara’s grandson and presented as potentially her heir; stays in Malinqua, drawing close to Liramelli.
  • Greggorio: dead, strangled at the gala while sitting in Garameno’s wheelchair; Lorian meant to kill Garameno.
  • Sarona: missing since shortly before Corene’s arrival; her body is found in the tunnels under the palace, and Lorian confesses to killing her.
  • Garameno: revealed able to walk; with Greggorio dead, Jiramondi calls him the only real choice for heir.
  • Jiramondi and Melissande: Melissande, whose mother’s navy has taken Palminera’s harbor, proposes a marriage of convenience to Jiramondi; Corene plans to sail with them to Cozique.
  • Alette: smuggled out of the palace through Leah, who has found her lover, Cheelin Barlio; at the end no one knows whether she reached safety.
  • Lorian: survives the gala night and confesses; his confession, relayed by Jiramondi, covers helping Morli plot the old murders, Garameno’s arranged accident, Sarona and Greggorio, and Jiramondi suspects him of bribing the first blood testers. His punishment is not recorded here.
  • Filomara: still empress, now with Coziquela forces in her harbor and city and Welchin warships offshore; Berringey at war with her. She accepts Corene’s apology.
  • Nelson Ardelay: in Palminera, alive; slipped through the Berringese blockade bearing an elaymotive for the empress.
  • Offstage: Darien (regent, still uncrowned), Zoe, Josetta and Rafe appear only in letters and memories.
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